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Jo's Writing
20 November 2020 @ 03:20 pm
Hello everyone!

This is a post for you to give me both positive and negative feedback on my fiction, preferably constructive (meaning suggestions as to what I can do to get better)! I would really appreciate anything that would help me to better my work. :D

Comments can be (and are encouraged to be) anonymous, so as to prevent any inhibitions or bias in your comments. IP addresses are not logged. :) You won't hurt my feelings, don't worry!


Thank you, Jo. ♥
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Jo's Writing
16 December 2008 @ 11:02 pm
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Jo's Writing
Title: What is and What Isn't and How Sweet it all is
Author: [info]fatdix
Rating: R
Pairing: Jongho
Genre: Angst, Romance
Summary: That very night, Jonghyun stays till the bar closes, looping his arm around Minho’s as he leaves for home and gets into his car, having a nagging feeling that this could work, never mind all the other times his gut had told him absolute bullshit about who to love.
A/N: For [info]jongminho's 100 member contest. I used the picture prompt and tbqh I'm not sure I did it justice, but I tried. For [info]lexy_babby because she said she wanted Jongho angst. XD

What is and What Isn't and How Sweet it all is )
 
 
Jo's Writing
Title: And Your Bitter Clichés Can’t Outrun the Winter
Author: [info]fatdix
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Wongi
Word Count: 332 (flash fic)
Genre: Angst
Summary: Wonbin sometimes has a few choice words for how Hongki feels under his skin— fucking unreachable being one of the repetitive ones.
A/N: My first FT Island fic! It doesn't really make much sense and it's sort of ambiguous and gross and all the things I hate about emo fic, but it's still my first. I might have butchered their characters. I still don't know them all too well. :( For [info]xsammy09x.

And Your Bitter Clichés Can’t Outrun the Winter )
 
 
Jo's Writing
04 December 2008 @ 12:37 pm
Title: Closure
Author: [info]fatdix
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Onkey
Word Count: 200 (double drabble)
Genre: ?
Warning: Not your average smut?
Summary: Jinki puts an arm around him and kisses his neck, telling him over and over that he’s glad they were both promise keepers.
A/N: Response to prompt 12: The End Of The World over at [info]shineeworld. I took the prompt far too literally, and this has got to be the most twisted mix of genres ever. :( Don't shoot me!

Closure )
 
 
Jo's Writing
03 December 2008 @ 05:09 pm
Title: Organ Failure
Author: [info]fatdix
Rating: PG (for one swear word)
Pairing: Jongyu
Genre: Angst
Summary: My voice goes a little higher; sounds like a crack. A big crack in the ground, and you step to the side (safety first).
A/N: For [info]jongyu's 200's a couple contest! Used the second prompt, Soulstar's 잊을래 @ 080926 Super Junior Kiss the Radio. Kind of disappointed with this one, I'm afraid. One day I shall write good Jongyu (or at least try).

Organ Failure )
 
 
Jo's Writing
01 December 2008 @ 11:03 pm
Title: Forestation
Author: [info]fatdix
Rating: G
Pairing: 2min
Genre: Fluff, Romance
Warning: Cavities
Summary: Minho likes when he sees Taemin laugh, but pretends to be too tall to notice when Taemin makes awkward eye contact.
A/N: Taking a break from everything else I'm writing (which is all either really heavy or really long). I didn't want to think when I wrote this, so here I give you mindless fluff! :D

Forestation )
 
 
Jo's Writing
30 November 2008 @ 08:00 pm
 THE ANONYMOUS FEEDBACK MEME  


PLEASE GUYS?!?? I need some concrit. :( Do it!

Alternatively, you can leave me feedback on my own feedback post, which is located here.

LOVE YOU GUYS.
 
 
Jo's Writing
27 November 2008 @ 11:00 pm
Title: Basting
Author: [info]fatdix
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Keyho
Word Count: 200 (Double Drabble)
Genre: Drama
Warning: Implied Character Suicide
Summary: In which Minho leaves Key with his biggest thanks.
A/N: Response to prompt 11: Turkey over at [info]shineeworld. Idk why I keep writing things like this. :( But the idea wouldn't leave me. This is also my first Keyho, so be gentle! And yes, I did actually use the prompt. XD

Basting )
 
 
Jo's Writing
20 November 2008 @ 12:47 pm
Title: With My Wings
Author: [info]fatdix
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Minhonew, 2Min
Word Count: 462 (flashfic)
Genre: AU, Drama
Warning: Implied Pedophilia (PEDOHO!)
Summary: The only other time I remember seeing you smile is when we were teenagers. Stupid, childish, holding hands and feeding each other cotton candy mouth to mouth under the stands. | In which Onew has a second chance to watch Minho, this time from the sidelines.
A/N: Response to prompt 10: In Love over at [info]shineeworld. This might get a bit confusing, sorry about that. AUverse kind of screws with my head sometimes and reality gets a little skewed. D: Dedicated to Shii ([info]nyappyx3) because she loves tofuho!

With My Wings )
 
 
Jo's Writing
18 November 2008 @ 11:49 am
Title: I Won't Sleep if You Won't Sleep
Author: [info]fatdix
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Taekey, Onkey
Word Count: 200 (double drabble)
Genre: Angst
Summary: I laugh, because I don’t know how else to make a sound that won’t scare the neighbours shitless.
A/N: Another response to prompt 09: Secrets over at [info]shineeworld. I used more of the lyrics this time from other parts of the song.

I Won't Sleep if You Won't Sleep )
 
 
Jo's Writing
17 November 2008 @ 02:49 am
Title: Mangoes
Author: [info]fatdix
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Onkey
Genre: AU, Smut
Summary: His small, moist lips formed a slight pout, and how could Jinki say no to that?
A/N: Cop!Jinki and slut!Key. This fic actually has very little to do with Mangoes. Enjoy (even though this fic is an utter fail)! ^^

Mangoes )
 
 
Jo's Writing
15 November 2008 @ 11:01 am
Title: Feeling
Author: [info]fatdix
Rating: PG
Pairing: Taekey
Word Count: 150 (drabble and a half)
Genre: angst, romance
Summary: I can’t be sure, because who is ever sure about these things?
A/N: Response to prompt 09: Secrets over at [info]shineeworld.

Feeling )
 
 
Jo's Writing
06 November 2008 @ 03:21 pm
Title: Your Hardened Lips
Author: [info]fatdix
Rating: R
Fandom: SHINee
Pairing: 2MIN
Disclaimer: Not real.
Summary: All that sugar can’t be good for your body...

Your Hardened Lips )
 
 
Jo's Writing
06 November 2008 @ 02:56 pm
SHINee )

F.T. Island )
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